The title is good: "Considerations For Maintaining Protocols Using Grease and Variability" and highlights there are two categories of things discussed in the doc: grease, and variability.
Sections 2 and 4 have good titles, and show symmetry between these two categories:
2: Considerations for Greasing Protocols
4: Considerations for Increasing Protocol Variability
Section 3 however is a top level section Deployment Considerations and Incentives for Greasing but is specific to greasing, so should be a subsection under 2.
Section 5 Considerations for Protocol Versions also only discusses grease and so should be a subsection of that.
The title is good: "Considerations For Maintaining Protocols Using Grease and Variability" and highlights there are two categories of things discussed in the doc: grease, and variability.
Sections 2 and 4 have good titles, and show symmetry between these two categories:
2: Considerations for Greasing Protocols
4: Considerations for Increasing Protocol Variability
Section 3 however is a top level section Deployment Considerations and Incentives for Greasing but is specific to greasing, so should be a subsection under 2.
Section 5 Considerations for Protocol Versions also only discusses grease and so should be a subsection of that.